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The Mage's Tower



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Wed Jul 05, 2017 11:27 pm
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Mageheart says...



I reviewed your work, @RubyRed!
mage

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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

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Fri Jul 07, 2017 4:49 am
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Ejay1806 says...



Please review "The Bottled Beauty"
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Fri Jul 07, 2017 10:26 am
Mageheart says...



Alright! Since there's some other things I need to review, @Ejay1806, I'll review it on June 10th. Also, can you please fill out the form that I posted in the first post of this forum? Thanks!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sat Jul 08, 2017 11:20 am
Mageheart says...



I reviewed all three parts of your first chapter, @Sheadun! I hope my reviews helped.
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Fri Jul 14, 2017 3:20 pm
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Featherstone says...



You were looking for more requests, so would you mind reviewing my 3 chapters of Hunter I've written so far?

Hunter: Chapter 1.1 - Pack [Edited]

That's the first one; the others are linked on the side of that page as per usual
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:34 pm
Mageheart says...



Sure thing! I'll get them done over the course of the next three days, @FalconryGirl9086!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sat Jul 15, 2017 12:55 am
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Featherstone says...



Thanks! :)
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Sun Jul 16, 2017 5:23 am
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mephistophelesangel says...



Hi! Could you please review the first part of my short story?

Work: (so don't lose me, follow me home)
Link: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/5
Brief Description: Outsiders observing two men who seem a bit more unusual than most.
Other: Rated 12+ because the story (indirectly) deals with mental health issues and trauma.
  





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Sun Jul 16, 2017 8:19 pm
Mageheart says...



I'll review it in a couple of days, @mephistophelesangel! It already sounds really interesting from the description.
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sun Jul 16, 2017 10:00 pm
gxldencrxwns says...



I wanna dump all of my story drafts on you, then I realized they're not even halfway done. But I published a short story recently, could you review it?

She Likes Girls
  





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Mon Jul 17, 2017 10:58 am
Mageheart says...



I could definitely review it, @gxldencrxwns! Could you please fill out the form I have in the first post, though? I would really like if people filled it out when requesting a review. Thanks!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Mon Jul 17, 2017 11:02 pm
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gxldencrxwns says...



Sure, let me try again!

Work: She Likes Girls
Link: She Likes Girls
Description: Lance finds out his girlfriend, Candice, has an eye on someone else. Someone of the same gender.
  





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Tue Jul 18, 2017 12:12 pm
Mageheart says...



I reviewed your work, @FalconryGirl9086! I'll review your work tomorrow, @mephistophelesangel, and your work the day after that, @gxldencrxwns!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Wed Jul 19, 2017 11:55 am
Mageheart says...



I reviewed your work, @mephistophelesangel! I hope my review helped.
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Thu Jul 20, 2017 11:02 am
Mageheart says...



I reviewed your work, @gxldencrxwns! I hope my review helped, and and don't be afraid to ask me any questions you have about it!
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  








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