Hi! I wrote a short story about true events I went through recently. It's a short story with poems intertwined into the narrative. I would love if more people could read and review it. Please and thank you!
Hello Hello, I am here to ask for feedback for a poem I might publish in a litmag or journal. It involves both Shakespeare and strong language, so do keep that in mind but I am excited to see what you all think.
hello i would like a review for my first-ever short story, Diamonds fell from the sky(I don't know how to make it into a link, can someone help me on this). Thank you
ThekingsAdvisor wrote:hello i would like a review for my first-ever short story, Diamonds fell from the sky(I don't know how to make it into a link, can someone help me on this). Thank you
I am sorry if this is against the rules (let me know so I can delete it) but I totally could if you wouldn't mind giving a look at my poem!
Howdy! I’d love to get a review on chapter seven of my novel. It’s been chilling in the Green Room for a while. If you could read the prior chapters beforehand, that would be amazing, but not at all necessary. Thanks in advance!
@Horisun have you got a short summary of what's happened so far? I'm not sure I can commit to reading the whole thing, but might get a chance to read this specific part and would love to be a bit more informed so I can actually be useful!
Hey all! Would love it if anyone could give some input on my poem, The Loud Silence. (I know, I know, just give it a try!) Plus it is currently in the green room, I think, so you'd get extra points (but don't review it just for that!). The Loud Silence
A dragon has settled in a town called Monsbury, and a young girl has gone missing. A "Magic Practitioner," Jo, and her assistant, Oscar, have been sent to kill the monster with the help of the town's residents. They are accompanied by Angelique, the missing kids older sister.
Some additional exposition: a "Magic Practitioner" in this world is basically a wizard. The setting is sort of late-1800s-esque. They need to hike up "King Mountain," also known as "Fotia," to reach the dragon.
Thanks a lot for the offer! If you have any other questions, let me know : )
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