I have reviewed Chapter One (Not sure of the title yet =P) at long last. Sorry it took me so long. Have a great day and thanks for requesting a review from the dragon.
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Hello, I would like a review on my latest chapter. Honestly speaking, i'm not really interested in grammar reviews. I want the real deal; an actually review where you can tell me if my writing sucks or not. I need it. Thanks in advance
"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages.
'Are you all right?'
Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars." — Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites
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