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Tanyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Hai.

Would you do me the honer of reviewing the next part of Stop and Stare for me, please?

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Thanks.

Pointe, Skinsy: done!

Wow You really are dedicated!

If you could, I would really appreciate any and all reviews for my novella-in-progress, "In Memoriam." I recently finished Part 3, but any new reviews and critique would be nice!

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Part 2: viewtopic.php?t=74829
Part 3: viewtopic.php?t=75284

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Chapter 9!!
And 10 is on the way in a few hours.....sorry this is such a long time coming!
Thanks in advance, hope you like it!
~day

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Ahh, I want to submit this (and, yes, I realize I only have a day ) but I think it needs hefty editing and reviewing! I'd love for you to review it, given that your reviews seem to be thorough and good. Thanks

Paul, day, abba : done!

Tanya! ^^

Could you review the next part of Stop and Stare for me, please?

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Please and thank you!

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ch. 7 of the Magi
please review!!!

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Mine is the prologue to a longer novel, which I'm going to post shortly, and falls into the action/adventure drama. If you could review it that would be great!

Hey, Tanya. *waves enthusiastically* How have you been, girl??

I've written a new excerpt. Remember the last 'Selim' piece you read? Well, this one is only a page or two after what you've read. And I've finally showed Julius' love to him and Selim's kindness as well.

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I'll be truly thankful if you take a look at it.
Thanks, Sweets.

Skins, Pointe, Fighta, Rolf and Gheala: done!

OOH! Pretty please? It's for Skin's contest... : ) topic76573.htm

Milk, done!

I'll give it a go.

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-Kafka