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Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:05 am
nicchaos says...



Hey! I want to thank you for reviewing my poem earlier.
I have just posted another one called the dawn perspective. It has gotten good praise so far but not enough reviews. Could you help me again and check it out?
Thanks a ton
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In greek mythology, chaos was the formess void from which came night and day, the earth and sky, time and light, gods and beasts. In short, all things were born from chaos.

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Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:50 am
Yuriiko says...



Done all! :3
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Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:21 am
Yuriiko says...



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Anyone? :3
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Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:01 pm
WritingWords says...



Can you review the link in my signature? Your thread seems really popular. I'm inspired. Your reviews must be really good!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!
  





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Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:29 am
Yuriiko says...



I'm done, WW!

Who else? :D
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Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:06 pm
Crimsona says...



Me me me please! *raises hand and waves it about*

Can you please review the first two chapters of my novel called The Kirja. It's genre... well, I'm not too sure, so I'd just go with 'General Fiction' I suppose.

novel.php?id=592

:) Thank you!
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:47 pm
Wolferion says...



Cheers Yuri!

Alright, I know I took my time and the changes aren't of galactic size, but I'm trying to first create a good standing point and from it continue with all the new ideas I've got meanwhile =)
Would like to ask for a review, the same drill like always ^^ Here's the link, http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69044.html

Best wishes!
Kyou
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:55 pm
Yuriiko says...



All done! :3
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Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:48 am
Yuriiko says...



*coughs*
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:20 pm
Shearwater says...



Hi Yuriiko! It's Pink :D
If...you have some time to spare, mind reviewing this little piece for me? Don't worry, it's short, but It's a excerpt from a new novel I'm starting and I wondering what others thought of the idea.
post762535.html#p762535
Thanks in advance ;)

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Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:37 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Me again. I know poetry isn't your favorite thing to review, but would you please review this poem for me? I'd appreciate it greatly. Thank you!

topic69388.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:13 am
Yuriiko says...



I'm done!

Anyone else?
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:00 pm
Kiwisatsuma says...



Hey! :) Would you be able to review my September Contest entry? But don't feel you have to review it before the competition closes, any time is great.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post764445.html#p764445

Thankyou! :smt001
  





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Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:13 am
Yuriiko says...



Done! :3

Anyone else?
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 2:35 am
Jalmoc says...



Plz check my story out. :) topic69557.html#p763658
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