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It's a poem but I'd really appreciate it if you'd check it out

done!


Anyone else? *puppy eyes*

Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.

Done!

Sorry, if my review was too short because I think there are only small things to nitpick or to correct on, Puffy Cherry. It's because I think that piece was very well-written! Good job on that!

Anyone else?

I think you forgot about what I asked in the chat =) Oh well, nevermind that. I've rewritten it anyway, so if you feel like it this time, there's the link =) Sinful Pride - Chapter 2

Have a nice day!
Kyou

Done, kyou!

Anyone else?

:3

Please?

Hi Yuri!

I was wondering if you could review my piece? Here's the information:

Genre: Sci-Fi
Title: The Robot With Human Hair, Prologue. (It's a working title for now, until something better comes along. )
Link: Right here.

Thanks! :3

~Sporks

done, Spork!

Love it!

anyone else?

Title: Wolfsbane, Mustard-seed and Silver
Genre: Fantasy/alternate history
Link: post731299.html#p731299

Please be as harsh as possible!

Title: Discovery
Genre: general fiction
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=64517

(Don't worry, it doesn't get disturbing. You'll know what I mean when you start reading it.) Thank you!

Hi! Would you mind reading my romantic fiction called "Bald is Beautiful?" It's rated E, so it isn't over 16 or 18!

Munchkin and Kaila- Done!

:3

TL- G- I'm working on it.

Hey Yuriko. Shubhi back for you for another review.

Here's the link and it would e great if you could get on it soon, as it's a project: Chilly Farm.

It's the worst I have ever written. But you should have seen the topic.

~Shubhi

TL- G- Done!

Shubhi- working on it.

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Could I trouble you to review this? Whenever you have the time. Thanks a bunch in advance!