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Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:05 am
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TheCrimsonLady says...



Sorceress: Chapter 7

I'd appreciate it if you could review this :). Thanks!!!
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Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:13 am
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@Aurora99 I shall hopefully get to this by early July! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I have exams :( To make up for it I'll try and review your previous chapters as well :D
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Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:56 am
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Oh it's fine!!
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I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault