I'd love to trade reviews with you if you have the time. I'm currently finishing up a gen fiction novel about a group of at risk youth (behavioural/emotional issues, petty crimes etc.) at a wilderness high school. If you're interested, you can find the first few chapters at topic71017 and topic71023. I want to do one final readthrough before I post the complete novel but it should be up by next weekend in the Advanced Critique section. The first few chapters will give you a chance to get to know a little of the story before you decide if you want to commit to the whole thing. It's really long (almost 100,000/ 35 chapters of at least 4 pages each) and I've heard that it's really difficult to find people who are willing to stick with a story that is so long. I really appreciate any reviewing you have time to do, even if you aren't able to continue all the way through the whole novel.
I'd love to trade reviews with you if you have the time. I'm currently finishing up a gen fiction novel about a group of at risk youth (behavioural/emotional issues, petty crimes etc.) at a wilderness high school. If you're interested, you can find the first few chapters at topic71017 and topic71023. I want to do one final readthrough before I post the complete novel but it should be up by next weekend in the Advanced Critique section. The first few chapters will give you a chance to get to know a little of the story before you decide if you want to commit to the whole thing. It's really long (almost 100,000/ 35 chapters of at least 4 pages each) and I've heard that it's really difficult to find people who are willing to stick with a story that is so long. I really appreciate any reviewing you have time to do, even if you aren't able to continue all the way through the whole novel.
novel.php?id=911 This is under Fantasy Novels. I hope you like! -maxlovesfang200
"You must be some kind of deluded because when I look at you I see the most beautiful girl in the entire universe."-Christopher James Leming, my sweet boyfriend
can you review my first five novel chapters or, even just some of them? four has one review and five has none, so if you could find time I'd be really greatfull. it's action-adventure, but no descrptions of bugs, you'll be glad to know. the first link is here, subsequent links are provided at the bottom of every chapter. topic73681.html thanks, ---Psudiname
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Can you review my first chapter of "Sealed by Fire" and if you have time, the second chapter? Just so you know, it's a romance novel. Here's the link: topic86021.html and here is the link to the second chapter: topic86161.html
Thank you so much!
Though no one can go back and make a brand new start, anyone can start from now and make a brand new ending. ~Author Unknown
Hi there! Please review my fantasy short story: topic86215.html Thank you
We'reallalittle weird. Andlife's a littleweird. Andwhen wefindsomeonewhoseweirdnessis compatiblewithours, we joinupwith them and fallin mutual weirdnessand callit love.
When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings. — Dean Jackson
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