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LuminescentAnt · 2023-05-10T20:56:00Z

CLOSED Hi, it's your friendly neighborhood ant here! Welcome to my Bubble Tea Stand!🧋Here you can purchase your very own bubble tea reviews for a work that is in need of reviews, or just feedback in general- and at no cost to you! You can order different kinds of reviews, and different sizes too! But first, let's go over what I can and cannot review: Works I Can Review: - Novels/Chapters/Episodes - Some poems-* I will explain this later - Stuff in the "Other" section - Short Stories - Articles if I know about the topic you are discussing** Rules and Information: - I can't review anything rated higher than 16+, so 16+ is the maximum - I cannot review works with any sexual scenes, only works with light kissing - It cannot be longer than a 15 minute read - It will take me about 3-4 days or less for a review for a work that is about a 12 minute or less read, but anything longer than that might be a little longer, like 5-6 days or less - You can request more than one review at once, but only if the time to read those reviews combined is less than 15 minutes *Poetry and **Articles: *Poetry: I am not very good at understanding poems that have hidden meanings or are complex, so only poems that are relatively easy to understand. For example, if you look at my poems, (https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/LuminescentAnt/portfolio/477960) they are mostly easy to understand and there are no hidden meanings. These kinds of poems I will be able to review. If you are unsure if your poem fits this criteria, just ask me and I'll let you know if I'm able to review it. **Articles: I usually don't read articles, but if you want me to read yours, I'll be happy to. I can obviously only review stuff about topics/shows/books that I understand and have seen. Some examples of topics I can review are Harry Potter, Marvel, Star Wars, Wednesday, or Percy Jackson. Again, if there is a topic that you are unsure if I have seen, just ask me, there's no harm! Now that we have finished with all that boring stuff, let's get to the menu! MENU Earl Gray Milk Tea This is basically the anything tea, so order this if you just want a basic review, and don't really care about what kind of review you want. Taro Milk Tea In these reviews, I will basically be commenting on different parts of your work, so like there would be a really big quote, and then a comment, and so on and so forth until the end of your piece. Matcha Milk Tea In these reviews, I will basically comment on the highlights: the parts of your work that I liked the most, and the parts that I thought you could improve on. This is another more "general" review. Mango Milk Tea I will review mostly about the plot of your novel/chapter, and what you could improve about the development of the story arc or what I like about it. Honeydew Milk Tea I will talk about your character development, what I like about the characters and their traits, and what you can improve on about that. Lychee Milk Tea For poems, I will talk about your choice of wording and metaphors, and things like that. Brown Sugar Milk Tea For poems, I will focus on your choice of rhythm and rhyming in your poem, and your style of writing the poem. Passionfruit Green Tea This is a short review that is about one big paragraph long and gives an overall review about your work, does not use quotes, and just tells you about your story overall, and will usually have no specific details in it. Strawberry Milk Tea If what you want me to review is not on here, order a strawberry boba and then tell me what you want in your review, and I will do it for you! Just remember to tell me what you want the review to be like. New! And Stuff Method This is a new thing I'm trying, which is a method I came up with myself, and is for novels and shorts. Template is en-spoilered below! (Greeting and Intro) [b]Visual Details and Stuff:[/b] (insert comments about visual description here) [b]Emotions, Thoughts, and Stuff:[/b] (insert comments about character thoughts and emotions here) [b]Character Development and Stuff[/b] (insert comments on character development here) [b]Pace of the Plot and Stuff:[/b] (insert thoughts about plot here) [b]Something I really liked and Stuff[/b] (insert comments about your favorite part) [b]Other Stuff and Stuff:[/b] (insert other stuff here) [b]Overall Things and Stuff:[/b] (insert closing thoughts here) Toppings and Stuff: Tapioca Pearls: This is the basic topping, put this if you don't want any of the other toppings. If you don't include this in your order, I will assume that you meant to put this in but you forgot. Herbal Jelly: I will not focus on grammar/spelling/punctuation/format if you do not include herbal jelly, but only if you do then I will include it in my review of your work. Cheezo: I have actually never seen anyone do this, but this is just her in case: If you for some reason want me to rate your work out of ten, then add the cheezo on top. Note: Except for the cheezo, you can only have one topping at once, so for example you can't have pearls and jelly. And that's it! If you have any questions or recommendations for a different type of review, please let me know! Like I said, you don't have to give me anything for the review, since I get points for it anyway. Have a good day and enjoy your bubble tea!

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Sun Mar 17, 2024 8:32 am

TheRebel2007 says... · Sun Mar 17, 2024 8:32 am

Hey there! I hope you are having a nice time wherever you are!

Can I request a Strawberry boba with taro, mango and honeydew? Some cheezo would be nice along with tapioca pearls. It would also be awesome if you could check out the previous three chapters as well!

The League of Life [Ch. IV, Nine]

P.S.: Stay hydrated!

Yes, to dance beneath the diamond skies with one hand waving free,
Silhouetted by the trees, circled by the circus sands --
With all memories and fate, driven deep beneath the waves,
Let me forget about today until tomorrow...

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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price

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