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I changed the title since I thought enjambment was already implied by saying line breaks so it would sound redundant. But yes, it still has a relation to enjambments.




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No, it's fine. I'm not in a rush so don't worry. :D
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@Haraya, But is it connected to the poem? By that I mean, does the message of your poem revolve around the title? Not just you indicating that it's from a prompt? I'm just making sure because this substantially affects the way I interpret your poem.
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Ah yes it's connected. Sorry if I confused you.




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Oh! My review might delay. I interpreted it differently -- oops sorry. @Haraya
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hey! here's a chapter of a novel i'm working on!. it leans fantasy but i'm trying to weave in sci-fi elements. whenever you have time, I'd love a comment or review




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Sure! I'd be on it:) @xenon
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@xenon the review will be posted in a few hours. I'm sorry that it's a bit late :(

edit: posted!
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Hi-ya! If you have the time, would you mind reviewing my main story, Sunshine Fog? I'll link you the first chapter! If you want, you can review one of my poems or a short story for something not as long. : )

Chapter 0 - A Preface Before You Read! This is the preface to the story, if you'd like a very very general idea of it.

Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking here's the link to the first chapter for you! <3




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I don't mind at all! In fact, I'll post the review by today or tomorrow, @Cow :D
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Hello @Katteex or should I be saying the damsel in eustress.

Could you take a look at this first chapter of my new novel?

I know you're busy with The Successor: The Fall of Morrow but please?? *offers cookies*

Here's the link: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1
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@harryhardy -

*throws cookies* I'll only receive the reviews you wrote

On a serious note, sure! But I can't promise an immediate review. When I finished up at least Chapter 3.1, then you're next!
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Okay thanks for considering @Katteex

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