YWS Bookmarks

Thinking of getting some YWS bookmarks made up. But before I do, I want to make sure the design is something people actually like!

So, how's this?


EDIT
Here's a second mock-up:


And a third mock-up:

I like it. The quote made me laugh.

Very suitable Maybe it could have the customary YWS blue background though?

Yes! I'd love them. But I do wish you put a different font. This seems a bit too generic for me.

Ooh, I like that. But I'm with Lava, I'm not sure about the font. Otherwise, though, I very much approve.

Definitely like the quote. Maybe use the header photo as the background, though? I don't know...That's just my personal preference.

Added a second and third mock-up taking into account the suggestions offered. Thanks for your help.

Cool! So far, I like the third one best.

Yeah, definitely the third one. I like the sword-pencil thing better than the book one.

And doesn't making bookmarks cost money? Oh wait, you're probably going to sell them, aren't you?

I really like the third one.

I like number 3, as well.

Although I think the website should be bumped up higher, so it's not just floating at the bottom of the bookmark like that.

... I'm rather tempted to let my inner designer look at this, but I think I will spare you any sort of ramble on that.

Although I will say that the font for the quote is a bit thin for the white in blue to work. White can fill in if the font is too thin. Maybe use the same font as the logo for the quote, to keep it from filling in when they get printed.

And that's where I'm going to cut myself off.

Thanks everyone for your help. Based on the consensus of y'all and a few others, I've gone ahead with the third mock-up.