This is about two guys I know. I'd like some constructive critism. Thanks.
Vulnerability shones in those baby blues
You must be wondering
if I care what you have to say
Sure I do
looking into those pale baby blues
A different blue assaults me
Cobalt in his anger
Bitter in his uncertainty
His words are tainted with hurt
As he asks if I'm angry
Of course I am
Looking into dark stormy blues
When sleep comes to take me
those blues make me stay
One gentle one rough
I once found comfort in both
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