hello i need help with this poem
'the portrait of the heart'
Maggots and worms crawling through my heart
Devouring the contents part by part
The jagged blade runs across my skin
splitting my chest apart
The red blood slowly drips out
it splatters on the floor, painting art
A wave of coldness washes over my body
Blurring my senses and the world around me
The dark cloud looms over my head
Drinking my essence and all the people around me
It's dark now and everyone is gone
They all left me waiting for me to drown.
i need help with the underlined line the most, also if you have any additional comments please feel free to critisize me
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