Oh my god, that poem was awesome! It couldn't've been better, it was that good. I didn't really see any errors with spelling or grammar. I love this poem, you're a really good poet!
I LOVE SPONGEBOB This poem thingy is amused my very much It inspires me to put more joy in my own poems this isn't really a review is it? Your helping me instead of me helping you I am at a lost for words this is a great poem thingy indeed Keep it up
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders