Sponge Bob

Another acrostic to add to my collection.


Sweet-natured little yellow sponge, your
Pores and craters are splashes
On that square canvas, to accompany that
Necktie. Your popularity continues to
Grow as time passes, your antics
Entertaining youths and adults alike.
Being the top cartoon eight years and counting,
Our trust in you to bring us smiles and fishy
Burgers has yet to waver, you little Goofy Goober!

Hi!

I think this was very creative and I loved it! The acrostic feature of it was extremely well-done; it did not seem forced at all. Well, I guess you said you were adding it to your "collection" so it probably wouldn't be horrible.

Anyways, I think the flow could be a little better.

Sweet-natured little yellow sponge, your
Pores and craters are splashes
On that square canvas, to accompany that

The first two lines didn't match up when I read it out loud.

Otherwise, great job on grammar, spelling, etc. and keep writing for your collection!

~Lili

I like this a lot. It's cute. I find it awesome that you found inspiration in Spongebob.That is deep I like these two lines a lot. The opening and the closing.

Sweet-natured little yellow sponge,

Our trust in you to bring us smiles and fishy
Burgers has yet to waver, you little Goofy Goober!

Nice job. I thought this was cute.

Hey Shiney,
I really liked this. It was a very clever poem, and some little words and phrases that you use really made it great. "Necktie" and "pores and craters are splashes" are probably your two best touches. I really have no constructive criticizm for you, however. Just keep up the good work!
-Alex

Hi, I liked this poem a lot. It is cute and clever. It was well written and it flows well. I don't have much else to say. Keep writing!

Thank you all for the reviews! And thanks for saying it's well written, because I wrote this In 5 minutes

This is cute, well-written, and made me smile. I like the ending.
I never thought I would like a poem written about Spongebob, but you proved me wrong.

-Liz

Adorable!
That's pretty much all I have to say. Long live Spongebob Squarepants!

Well I personally LOVE SpongeBob He is cute and square and has a great fashion sense.

Sweet-natured little yellow sponge, your He is sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!! Like cane sugar, but yellow. Yeah. I said yellow. He's yellow with craters, and fabulous!!!!!
Pores and craters are splashes Very adorable splashes, he's cute, like plankton!!
On that square canvas, to accompany that Did I mention that he was square?
Necktie. Your popularity continues to What color necktie? This is very important.
Grow as time passes, your antics His antics are important, list them.
Entertaining youths and adults alike. It entertains my mom!! And me.
Being the top cartoon eight years and counting,It was actually ten years
Our trust in you to bring us smiles and fishy I thought he was a sponge.
Burgers has yet to waver, you little Goofy Goober!Oh burgers. Wait, so they are cannibals!!!!! OMG!! He is so Goofy. Yes he is.

It was cute!!!!! I liked it and I like spongebob and plankton and squidward and patrick and sandy and mr krabs and that dude who always yells my leg! It wasn't a very serious, yeah, I get it, STOP PESTERING ME!! But yeah it was good and cute. I liked it!!

-thestorygirl

--> I'm a GOOFY GOOBER!! hahaha! (ROCK!)

LOL!!

--> you know, I'm a Spongebob fan so when I read the title, you already drew me in and I read this poem.
Soo.. cute, I don't care about grammars, poetry rules etc. as long as i understand the poem and I love it, everything will be okay!

--> yes, I just love your poem :]

love,
CS

I adore Spongebob, and I quite enjoy this!!

Sweet-natured little yellow sponge, your
Pores and craters are splashes
On that square canvas, to accompany that I wished this could flow a little bit better, in my opinion. (Bolded is my favourite part)
Necktie. Your popularity continues to
Grow as time passes, your antics
Entertaining youths and adults alike. Including me!
Being the top cartoon eight years and counting,
Our trust in you to bring us smiles and fishy
Burgers has yet to waver, you little Goofy Goober!

Excellent work and keep on writing!

--LPR.

Thank you all so much for your reviews!

thestorygirl, I can't add so much detail, for it is an acrostic, and there is a limit to what you can put before it becomes overkill. I was about to put "red" for his necktie, but it did not flow well when I did, so I took it out.

This is really good. I used to write a lot of acrostics, but I was never able to master it like you have with this little piece. Great work.

Ahahahahahaha, I read this and seriously laughed out loud. A poem about SpongeBob... I thought I'd seen it all when there was a poem about a rock but SpongeBob, that tops it all

Your writing is very good and I really like how you managed to capture the essence of SpongeBob in this cute, entertaining little poem. Goofy Goober, yes he is!

It was very cute and sweet and very descriptive of the show. Basically, you summed of SpongeBob in a poem. Heehee I love that show, I won bonus points in Biology by singing the theme song. It is a wonderful show and a wonderful poem. Not much to criticize, just saying that I enjoyed it. It made me smile at the very end. Good job!