I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. All in all a great poem!
- Liz
Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. ~E.L. Doctorow
Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five-year mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before. — Captain James T. Kirk
Good work.
