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Busheldood
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:07 am
Busheldood says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:07 am
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Ashley529
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:23 am
Ashley529 says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:23 am
Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring.

Keep it up.
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Doxie00
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:15 pm
Doxie00 says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:15 pm
Hey ! I love the rhymes adn the poem too :) Good work.
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pterascreams
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:33 pm
pterascreams says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:33 pm
I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. All in all a great poem!

- Liz
Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. ~E.L. Doctorow
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Busheldood
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:54 pm
Busheldood says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:54 pm
heyy, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it :)
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