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Last edited by Busheldood on Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring.

Keep it up.




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Hey ! I love the rhymes adn the poem too :) Good work.




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I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. All in all a great poem!

- Liz
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heyy, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it :)



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