If I fall, will you catch me?

If I fall, will you catch me?

If I trip, will you help me up?

If I stumble, will you break my fall?

If I spill my life to you,
Will you share yours?

If my heart breaks,
Will you put the pieces back together?

If I fall for you,
Will you catch me?

This poem is just me using my imagination, meaning its not really real. I just pictured a couple together and put words together...[and so far it is the shortest poem I've ever done...weird lol.] Anywho, let me know what you think, please!!

I like it I really do i think this is a wonderful poem.

That's a nice poem.

If I fall,
For you,
Will you catch me?

I don't think you really need the comma after "fall". The line break already supplies the pause there.

If my heart breaks,
Will you put the pieces back together?

I like this part. It really helps get your point across in this poem.
And as for the fact that you used your imagination for this, good job!

I like this poem, but I do have a few suggestions...

If I fall,
will you catch me?

If I trip,
will you help me up?

If I stumble,
will you break my fall?

If I spill my life to you,
Will you share yours?

If my heart breaks,
Will you put the pieces back together?could try "Will you put IT back to together"

If I fall for you,
Will you catch me?

I think that this is a good poem talking about what people fear and wonder before going into a relationship... Although the statement "If I fall, will you catch?" is kinda overused, you use it well here...

~Rain~

thanks guys!!! x) And will do!!!