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kittykat · 2008-01-03T02:12:33Z

This is my first poem posted, hope you like it! Please tell me what you think! I'm not very good at writing poems on the side like most people do so if you have any suggestions about that tell me! So here it goes... :-) "Tree" Buds then leaves are on your limbs, all falls off and you turn thin. But in the spring comes buds a new, hoping that it will turn to you to give it life and fall again comes the cycle that will never end unless you cut that poor tree down. Say good-bye until it's found a seed that fell on to the ground. Now say hello to the little leaf that will be a tree, giving air and a home to breath for the animals that will need. You cannot have leaves without the bark. The tree will never grow, so please don't chop our trees done, your actions will surely show.

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Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:41 am

Rena_Luvs_All says... · Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:41 am

2 words. it sucked.

sorry. i just think it could have been a hundred and ninty-nine percent better.

"Yes I'm Pretty, Not Beautiful. I Sin, I'm not a Devil. I'm Nice, I'm not an Angel." I Think You Know Who Said This One.

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Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
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