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ukgurl@hart wrote:Some words of advice: be careful how you try to physically describe him. This is always tricky. All we know now is that his eyes are blue, and that didn't seem important.
The insults don't seem extraordinarily shocking. They sound rather childish. I would work on something a little more clever. Or maybe build up the stiff tension in the room so an insult is more shocking.
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