This is my novel. Some chapters are very long, others are quite brief. The first chapter of my book is easily the weakest part, so please do help me with that part. I could use any advise. The story is told in the third person omniscient point of view by five teenagers. You will learn their stories. Some very sad, at least that's what I intended, if the stories are flat in their current state please do tell me. And now I leave you to your job as the reader. I wish to hear from you, I'm all ears. I mean, technically I'll be reading your words not hearing them so, "I'm all eyes."
Oh yeah, I'm sort of at a loss of what proper formatting is at the moment, so for everybody who is in the know of what it is please bear with me. I plan to address that issue very soon.
If this were a movie it would be rated
PG-13: PARENTS STRONGLY CAUTIONED
Some Material May Be Inappropriate for Children Under 13
For Intense Thematic Elements, Fantasy violence, intense action, Some Teen Partying, Including Underage Drinking, Brief Sexual Dialogue, Innuendo, Language, Brief Drug Use, An Intense Sequence Of Terror, And A Brief Disturbing Image.
If you're in Canada it would be rated
Canadian Home Video
14A
Rating
Violence, Frightening Scenes, Mature Theme, Disturbing Content, and Course
Language.
If you're from some where else I have no idea
what it would be rated.
By the way: If you are going to read it please tell me first so I can submit the latest version.
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