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Elemental Cycle- Fireborn

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Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:00 am
sylverdawn says...

I am currently writing a Fantasy Novel titled, Elemental Cycle- Fireborn.
I have six chapters completed and just posted the new draft of chapter 1.
Please review it, I need all the help I can get.

Here's the link to the thread.

For those who enjoy what they read, PM me and chapter 2 will be posted next week.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.


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Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:56 am
Rosendorn says...

Heya! This actually isn't the place to ask for reviews. That's Will Review for Food. :) However, even in that forum general requests like this aren't allowed. You have to ask only a few people to review at a time.

If you want to turn this into a thread where you get critique in the idea, plot, ect, let me know and I'll unlock this. But, for now, this is locked.
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