Well this is little snipet/preveiw thing of a novel I might write but... it feels like it may have been used before or I have heard it from somewhere else. Can someone help me?
p.s Sorry Mods should this be moved to writing tips or something? I fail at life...sorry.
It was believed that the minute after Lioh was born, dreadful things started occurring. It was believed that the birds stopped singing their sweet; tender song and that the world had entered an eerie hush. It was believed that she had the devils same piercing stare and the winds harsh voice. It was believed she was evil; that she deserved to die the most painful and horrible death.
Lioh was never stamped out though, her parents were only common farmers but they managed to move far enough away from the tiny town to avoid the feigned death raids searching for the child.
So no one from The Town of Ura missed little Lioh when she went missing at the age of six. The world started voicing their thoughts and the birds again started singing; when they thought the child of a demon was long gone.
Any thoughts?
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