I am determined in my books to have at least one main person die. Lots of people are going to get seriously injured. One person is going to be stuck in time, left alone in a dark room for thirteen--or so--years while never aging, never needing food or drink, and her only hope stuck in a utopia. One person is going to go through a incredibly incredibly incredibly painful operation in order to maybe gain the powers she needs to help on her journey. One person is going to be in love with a girl who has amnesia of sorts and doesn't remember him, and for a plot reason cannot tell her that she knows him. One person witnessed/slashed caused her parents deaths at the young age of five. That's what I can think of off the bat.
Okay, so split these between two books. Still, am I being too hard on my characters? I mean, some of this stuff happens to one person, and while I know that being too easy on a character is both boring for the reader and doesn't help a character grow, I'm wondering if I'm being too cruel. Am I?
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