I'd suggest leaving the title until later. It's best to finish a draft to pick a title; I've changed titles very often as I work on my story. For a long time it was "untitled." Usually, you come up with a working title first and go from there. Sometimes a title just fits and I don't touch it anymore... until the story changes and I need a new title.
If you want some title feedback, check out this game in Writing Activities. Be sure to only post one title at a time. The point of the game is to give short reactions to any one title. Post as many different titles in different posts as you want, and/or post the same title in different posts as often as you want.
Finally, it doesn't really mater what we think. It's what you think that maters. ^_^
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
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