Hey, everyone.
I'm writing a story, "Who would've thought?" and I posted the first two parts, but I really appreciate some feedback if anyone had a little extra time on their hands. I'm not very good with grammar, and I need a little assistance on the actual story. I feel like it's taking me a really long time to write, and a really long time for the story to pick up. So, if anyone could head over there and read it:
part one:
topic33532.html
part two:
topic33542.html
it would be a great help to me.
Thank you!
-Shannon
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