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Magician's Wars: Chapter 5



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Wed Jun 20, 2018 5:08 pm
kman134 says...



Hey, guys. I need help finishing Chapter 5 of Magician's Wars. If you are familiar with my story, then you know what I am talking about. If anyone wishes to help, then please reply.
  





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Fri Jun 22, 2018 4:45 pm
Tenyo says...



Hey kman!

I'm gonna me honest, it's really warm in my room so I don't have the concentration to read through this properly, but I did my best.

When I get stuck at times like this I come up with ten possible ways to go next (and if I get to ten without having to stop and think then I make it twenty.) Then pick my favourites and decide from there.

Alternatively do a similar thing with the characters, and list ten things that each of them might want to do right now.

Gabrielle seems like a wonderfully assertive character, and she and Genji have a great dynamic, so maybe they could meet up and have a discussion/argument over what happened with the books and whether to pursue it, depending on what either of them wants.
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