in my story their is a little contradiction with the way my female character reacts both physically and in conversation with this boy compared to her thoughts. Its like she's two different people- easily intimidated with males because of her abusive step-father and yet she has these steamy thoughts of the boy. Anyone have any advice on how I can bring these things together a lot more?
I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin. — David Eddings
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