Okay so here's my problem: I'm writing a young adult fantasy novel. I want to create a scene where my main character and her brother got into an argument because he found out that she slept with my other main character who he doesn't trust. Now normally he wouldn't care but her brother is under a curse that is making him slowly lose his humanity and rational thought. so he says some really unkind and hurtful things to her but I can't think of exactly what he'd say and what she'd say in response you think you could help me out with my little problem Here's a summary of the book so you could get a better idea of what the whole universe and concept of it is about:
Seventeen-year-old Charlotte “Charlie” O’Connor and her family are part of The Covenant, a secret society of witches and warlocks sworn to eradicate all vampires from existence. When her dad is kidnapped by Santiago, an ex- Covenant member turned vampire leader, Charlie knows she can’t take him down alone. So she and her brother head down to New Orleans, hoping for the help of the city’s head witch.
There she meets Caleb Mathieson, a night club owner with a secret. He’s a vampire/warlock hybrid, something she never believed possible. She doesn’t trust him because of his former allegiance to Santiago, but she has no choice when her brother is ambushed by a voodoo priestess. Loyal to Santiago, she curses him with an ancient voodoo spell which will cost him his sanity. Charlie vows to do whatever it takes to find her father and save her brother. Even if it means taking the spell into herself, and allying with a potentially dangerous—and attractive—hybrid.
they love and care about each other very much and they would do anything for the other including sacrifice themselves
She does know about the curse even casting a counter spell where she takes the affects of the curse on to herself
That being said I want it kind of like a small battle between the two where she ends up hurting him and regrets it and he really doesn't have any feelings so it doesn't matter
set in the present
i want him to says something that he would never say to her and it would really hurt her deep down. It needs to make her angry enough to let go so she can release some of those feelings but I don't know what that would be I mean in the book her dad tells her that she is basically useless because she can't control her powers but I don't think that's something that would really hurt her deep down it needs to be something that questions her values or integrity and I don't know exactly what that would be I'm kind of lost with the whole situation I can see it in my head I just can't quite translate it to words on paper plus both of them are a little rough around the edges they've never really had chances to be teenagers they've had to grow really quickly so I don't think they would talk like normal teenagers or argue like ones
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