Here is the basic idea. A master thief helps a slave escape from a slaver under the guise of helping him after a horrific event. The true intention is that the thief has been hired to "steal" the slave for another slaver for payment.
After learning a little more about the slave, the thief decides to forgo the original plan and help the slave get to a place where those that have control over slavery can't reach him.
I want this original plan to come to light with the slave which will add some tension between the slave and the thief. My original plan was for a letter to be found, detailing where the plan and drop point where the slave was to be taken. But this would be a mistake made by a novice, not a master thief like the one I have at the moment. I don't want a direct confrontation with the other slaver as they are in the middle of no where and haven't been found by anyone thus far.
So I need a means of this coming to light that is believable and makes sense from a plot aspect.
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