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Tue Dec 15, 2015 1:55 am
Kanome says...



(I AM SORRY IF I AM WRITING IN CAPS, WHERE I WORK, I TYPE FOR A LIVING AND I TYPE EVERYTHING IN CAPS AT WORK... CALLCENTERS UGH)

ANYWHO! I HAVE RECENTLY CAME BACK ONTO THIS SITE AND I HAVE A NEW STORY IDEA THAT I KINDA WANT TO PUBLISH BUT I WANT OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS, ETC... LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK:



CONTRI BELLROSE, A 16 YEAR OLD NORMAL HIGH SCHOOL GIRL ONE DAY WAS INVITED TO LIVE IN A MANSION UPON HER GOD-WORSHIPPING FATHER'S REQUEST AS PROTECTION. AS SOON AS SHE ARRIVES AT THE MANSION, SHE IS GREETED BY SIX MALES, THE HUKIANE BROTHERS, WHO HAPPENED TO BE DIFFERENT THAN NORMAL. HER LIFE TAKES THE TURN FOR THE WORST AS SHE REALIZES WHAT THE SIX MALES REALLY ARE.
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