Recently, I've added a brother for Peter Pan in Neverland's Curse. His name is Wyatt and he's one of the villains in the novel. (He won't stay that way, obviously. He'll be recruited to the side of the good guys at the end of book one.) My question for you guys is this: do you think I should keep him as a villain throughout the whole story? Or should I recruit him for the good guys as I have planned. Normally, I could answer this question myself but I'm sorta caught between the two storylines in this one.
The storyline if he stays a villain is simple. He and Peter fight and, at the very end of book one, he kills Peter. Well, Peter's not really dead but the readers don't know that. I like this a lot...but I also like the second storyline.
The storyline if he is de-villainized is also kinda simple. He helps Peter to capture Wendy and is almost killed by her in the process. In this case, Peter would have a greater motivation to kill Wendy. (She'll of course escape, giving us a reason for book two.)
So what would you guys do in my place? I really am quite caught between the two storylines.
Colly <3
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