Hey guys. A little help please? I am writing a children's story, and I want it to be good. But I think it might be too dark... I can't tell. Maybe it's just me but I don't want it to be dark. I want it to be GOOD. I want these 6-10 year olds to learn about courage and truthfulness blah blah blah. I just want my story to be good. So how dark is too dark? I can't even tell. Seriously I can't. If you have any tips, please share them.
The story is Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng. I think it took a turn for the worst in chapters 6 and 7.
Any help would be GREATLY appreciated.
Rachelle
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