I posted the first chapter of my new Fantasy book Fallen Civilization it mixes action and made junk I made up my self every thing in this first chapter is my own creation except for the names of certain songs,and gaming consoles
*slaps* 1.Your on a writing forum. Not a gaming one. Capatalize your titles. 2.Where are your periods? 3.This really isn't an advertising forum. 4.My lord, this story is the same grammer.
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
