I posted the first chapter of my new Fantasy book Fallen Civilization it mixes action and made junk I made up my self every thing in this first chapter is my own creation except for the names of certain songs,and gaming consoles
*slaps* 1.Your on a writing forum. Not a gaming one. Capatalize your titles. 2.Where are your periods? 3.This really isn't an advertising forum. 4.My lord, this story is the same grammer.
The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes.
*manly blush* — Arcticus
