Ideas for story

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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:22 am
thehoplessromantic says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:22 am
We could put like

My world crumbled. My knees buckled. All the oxygen left my lungs. As I saw my 10 year old sister, fall to the floor.
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:30 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:30 am
YESSS!!!
My world crumbled. My knees buckled. All the oxygen left my lungs. As I saw my 10 year old sister, fall to the floor.

I felt the urge to give up on living as I watched helplessly, tears falling, sobbing violently, shaking my entire body.
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:34 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:34 am
We have no ideas for the prologue lol. I just don't know what to put...




Should we make her mother die from the murderer as well? Or just her sister?
Like idk what to do for the prologue. Maybe some examples of how Aurora feels or smthing.
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:35 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:35 am
lol...I'm going to think up of something overnight and write it on the pad tomorrow morning.
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:40 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:40 am
I know this is going off topic, but I really appreciate you, Hop. If I knew you in real life, you would be my best friend of all time. You seriously understand me like wth.
Are you a daydreamer? Lollll
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:42 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:42 am
lol hehe im being all cheesy
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:42 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 2:42 am
Omg didn't realize that rhymed.
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Sat Sep 06, 2025 3:25 am
velvetcatsz says... · Sat Sep 06, 2025 3:25 am
Also should we post a teaser or sneak peek?
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Fri Sep 12, 2025 9:51 pm
velvetcatsz says... · Fri Sep 12, 2025 9:51 pm
Hi did we give up??? WE HAD SO MANY IDEAS TOT
K I'm starting Chapter 1 maybe
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Fri Sep 12, 2025 9:52 pm
velvetcatsz says... · Fri Sep 12, 2025 9:52 pm
Hehehe
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The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein