Need an editor: Promethean Chronicles

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Mon Jul 30, 2018 1:54 am
kman134 says... · Mon Jul 30, 2018 1:54 am
I need an editor for my new fantasy story.

Promethean Chronicles - Story about a squire- turned- knight-errant who lost his master at the hands of the Eldritch Lord and suffers from the depression brought on by witnessing the slaughtering of his fellow brigade but after meeting an elf thief named Aileena, he is sent on a quest of a life time where he uncovers his true destiny in a world turned dark. (takes place the continent of Promethea in the world of Terra).

can anyone help with it?

Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 1
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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price