Hello writers, so this year I plan to write LN with some hebrew and japanese culture. I thought it is better idea if I can get some seggestion or new idea about my story.
Here we begin
One day a hebrew geek who live & study in Boarding School in japan, Tristov B*n ****tov, get new assigment to become a assistant in the school's physics lab. In the last experiment, he found that his physics teacher is building the teleport gate connected with a mysterious world, named Adnen.
Things getting worse since Tristov get a new neighbour (in a dorm) with a nickname Danya. He investigates the cases in the school and collects strange items. His curiosity led him to a fact that his boarding school was built by the greatest corporation in the world, perhaps in the universe too. The Alcoune Corporation.
For the first day I write this light novel, actually I got inspired from half Life games, since I love to play and mod the games for 8 years! But the differeance, the protagonist could not use physical ability to fight, he just like Sherlock Holmes ( or he seems like Joker be coz he is actual freaky geek). He should think to create traps or figure out his enemies' weakness
Who wants to criticize? Add some suggestion please
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