Hello all! So, I have an idea for a story and I'd really like some help with the plot and general feedback.
So the story is centered around angels and demons. But the real angels aren't the chunky babies you see in the fountains. They're stronger and wiser than humans and they don't have bird wings. It's difficult to explain. When you look at one, it's like staring at the sun without going blind and you get the same terror as if you were looking at your murderer. Generally speaking, angels aren't seen on earth until a boy comes along named Noah. (I can't decide whether Noah is ten or twenty)
Noah has no problems seeing the angels (and demons) of this world. The archangels get a little nervous when Noah at age seven manages to kill his first guardian angel. (I haven't worked out how he managed that quite yet) The narrator of the story is a guardian angel named Valerie. As a form of punishment for her rebellious attitude she is sentenced to be Noah's guardian. She soon finds out that the boy is eagerly sought after by a very powerful demon named Damon.
Together, Valerie and her earthly assignment have to fight to defeat Damon and his band of misfit demons. The catch with this story is that, I want the ending to be bittersweet. Like, Noah is depressed or something to begin with and he finally comes around but is killed in the end. To get the feeling I would like, he needs to die.
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