Hey everyone!
So I'm Noaven and I saw Deanie do this open prewriting post for a novel and I wanted to see what feedback I'd get from the ideas I've gathered so far for my own novel. This would be my first novel and I'd appreciate some constructive criticism about it! Honestly I feel it may be a bit all over the place and there are several things that I'm just all around iffy about.
As for the story itself the general idea goes like this:
It is a romance adventure in which long time best friends get trapped in a vintage video game. During their time in this game they are faced with several blasts from their past and are constantly threatened by bugs (errors/glitches in the game) as well as anomalies that happened to be shaped like spiders, beetles, etc. These events will lead the main characters to both confront truths about themselves as well as question their feelings for each other. In order to confront the creature that is the name sake of the game (World Weaver) they will need to be firm in their feelings because they only get one shot and have no room for doubt in each other or themselves.
There's a bit more to it that i'll be adding on the next post, but this covers the major focus of the novel! Next post is gonna go into detail about what does what/ what some of the more vague/made up stuff is exactly, as well as go over the main characters.
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