Young Writers Society

There's a girl on my drumline who doesn't brush her teeth, shampoo her hair, or shave her arm/leg/ facial hair. I find these traits physicaly disgusting. And, although society's image of an ideal woman contains little body hair, the overall appearance and foul odor of the girl I mentioned earlier is sickening.

And last time I checked, the sense of smell is a NATURAL function.

You see that's taking it a little bit TOO far lol.
I just don't like being hairy.

Not being clean is simply unhealthy. But shaving body hair has absolutly nothing to do with cleanliness. Not shaving your armpits doesn't make you more or less clean, the choice to bath does.

I'm fine with not wearing makeup (I don't wear it anyway, and I don't even need it), but I can't stop myself from shaving. I just feel nasty when I don't.

But I thought the poem was really good.

(You wrote the word "am" as "aam" somewhere in there, though. And "absolutely" as "absolutly.")