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Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:19 am
LowKey says...



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:)
Necropolis SB / Necropolis DT

Once was Dreamer, is now LowKey_Lyesmith.

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Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:59 pm
Teague says...



Trickster
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"Teague: Stomping on your dreams since 1992." -Sachiko
"So I'm looking at FLT and am reminded of a sandwich." -Jabber
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:12 am
Gadi. says...



Razorblade's
A Red Sunshine

(Visitation from the past, would you call it?)
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:22 pm
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post290083.html#290083 gladis a man and his sunflower
Some people call me the space cowboy
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2008 1:05 am
Gadi. says...



post291624.html#291624
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Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:15 pm
Palantalid says...



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gadi's The Road Under.

in case some one pries through my stuff...i'd like it if they stayed to more recent works as my previous ones were quite inexperienced and i'm evaluating them myself.
What syllable are you seeking,
Vocalissimus,
In the distances of sleep?
Speak it.
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:34 am
Gadi. says...



On Winter's Aging
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Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:12 am
Gadi. says...



:( ?
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:52 am
Gadi. says...



It has been more than a week and nobody has even done this.
Okay, SOMEBODY just write a message on here without critiquing me and the cycle would start again.

Please?
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Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:53 pm
BigBadBear says...



The heart of the heavens

post299818.html#299818

Great job!

P.S. (I would like a crit on StoweAway please!)
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
  





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Mon Feb 11, 2008 10:14 am
Aedomir says...



Woo 3B! i'll catch up on stoweaway now

The Immortals #8, my favourite part:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic25778.html
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
  





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Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:19 pm
Gadi. says...



The Immortals #1.
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Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:21 pm
Rydia says...



Audition
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

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Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:33 am
Gadi. says...



Mother, I Love You.
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Tue Mar 11, 2008 11:35 pm
Gadi. says...



:( I am sad.
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