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Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:24 pm
Kylan says...



The Magician

Good work.

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Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:26 pm
Gadi. says...



Kylan's Sub Rosa,
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:33 pm
chocoholic says...



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gadi's Heart of the Heavens
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Sat Jan 05, 2008 8:28 pm
Gadi. says...



Chocoholic's Understanding
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:26 pm
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Ars Poetica
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Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:39 pm
Gadi. says...



Acoustic Sensitivity's I Won't Let My Guard Down on You Again
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Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:20 pm
W.T.Meighan says...



Gadi's - The Chains of Death
  





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Mon Jan 07, 2008 8:25 pm
Kylan says...



Virulence #1

Keep up the good work.

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Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:53 am
Acoustic Sensitivity says...



Fuhrer
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Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:05 pm
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The Magician.
✖ I'm sick, you're tired. Let's dance.
  





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Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:50 am
Kylan says...



Caffe sopeso

By the way, Acoustic, that was cheap. It kind of defeats the purpose of this thread to stick in something of mine you've critiqued before I posted. You were obviously too selfish to spend time critiquing something else.

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Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:27 am
Gadi. says...



Kylan's Carticide
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Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:46 am
Teague says...



A Devout Death
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Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:27 am
Gadi. says...



Exhilirating Monotomy
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Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:10 am
chocoholic says...



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The Man and his Sunflower

By the way, how do you make the link the title, if that makes sense? Like, not with the actual address.
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