All critiques (no matter how harsh) are definitely appreciated on the above story and any of the following chapters! I'll return any critique I receive to the best of my ability Thanks in advance!
Everyone's digging up old topics today! I guess kitty15's challenge is having effect.
In any case, this should have been locked already. The best to get critiques is by critiquing someone else's work then asking them to return the favor.
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind