The critique sandwich - Family Guy style

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Nate
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Sat May 25, 2013 2:27 pm
Nate says... · Sat May 25, 2013 2:27 pm
The critique sandwich has long been a popular kind of YWS review, but its name comes from a Family Guy episode. So with Review Day coming up, here's how the critique sandwich is done by Stewie Griffin:

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Sat May 25, 2013 3:06 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Sat May 25, 2013 3:06 pm
Haha when I was watching this bit of Family Guy I was actually thinking of YWS! :D
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