I'm pretty good at dialogue, at least, I like to think so.
My real problem is at the end.
"We need to get to the house." He said
"Okay, we should take the dirt road" She said
"We need our dirt bikes for that." He said
"How about we just take one?" She said
"Good idea" he said.
this is an extremely quick segment written up for example purposes, do not judge my skill in dialogue by this passage
See the problem? He said, she said. I know of other words to use, like He 'exclaimed' or she 'shouted' but when they aren't actually screaming at eachother it's hard to add variety to dialogue like that.
So my question is, what other words can I use for normal speaking?
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