If someone could give me their opinion if the 'saw' the clothing or not, I'd appreciate it. If not, and the paragraph is lacking in details, could someone mention what exactly is missing and where I need to improve on the missing details.
Thank you.
The paragraph, describing the clothing.
I wore one linen shirt, which was tucked inside red breeches I sewed from a fox. There was a piece of twine threaded inside the fox's tail, and it served as further protection around my neck. Wolf pelts were carved into two gray vests and the fourth layer was another vest sewn from wool. But the heavy wool vest was ancient and it occasionally slipped from my shoulder blades, allowing gusts of wind to penetrate directly through the wolf pelts.
Secured around my neck was a thick and colourful tunic I sewed from an abundance of animal hides when I was nineteen. On the left side of my shoulder; the coyote's head rested and its eyes stared blankly straight ahead. The opposite shoulder displayed three red feathers embedded into the fibers of the fur. From my neck to my waist, skins of foxes, deer, badgers, hares and squirrels intermixed and produced a magnificent pallet of browns, reds and black shades of fur. Near my bum, three tails were also sewn in the center of the tunic; a skunk's tail was left, a coyotes' and to the right, an otter's tail. The fur tunic itself represented the exceptional skill I possessed in the art of hunting and skinning hides.
In case anyone is wondering, this character is a tad cold, lol.
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