I need help! I'm trying to write these spy stories I have tons of great ideas but whenever i try to write them out they look terrible. I've created the characters, i can write a summary for the chapters, I even have ideas for filler chapters but I can't write them out! And the worst thing is that the story has to be in a third person narrative and that makes it 11 times harder at least if it was 1st it'd be easy but with 3rd it's impossible.
The story I'm working on is about teen espionage. Four teen girls and four teen guys. The girls are Tara "the chubby, passionate, tough, and wild one", Esther "the super sweet, smart and loving one", Melody "the shy, sporty, competitive, energetic, and artistic one" and Skye "the rich, stylish, vain and sassy one" they make up a full team who go on missions around the world and through space, they were once normal girls but once they started high school they were recruited as spies and found out about villains, the world and even aliens! Yes here will be aliens in this but they find out how crazy the world is and learn things along the way even Esther.
Then there's the boys Drew "the loner, strong, secretly talented, and fearless guy" Christian "the sweet, flirtatious, sort of dumb, religious and sexy one" Sean "the shy, fearful, highly intelligent, scientific, and tall and fair one"and Tye "the short but strong, energetic, flamboyant, wanna be player guy" The boys used to be spies but secretly resigned and had there memories wiped. Blake, head of the agency, tried to find out if there was foul player but found whoever did it hid it well, very well and 2 years later after that someone sends out threats to have them captured or killed and puts the aid in the girls hands who know the guys and are even friends with them, Tara and Drew are dating also but finding out there friends are spies come as a shock to them and along the way they find out foul play was involved and deeper secrets are reveled.
Sounds good right? There's more too I have ideas for when they start to become spies and there relationships with the boys and there really good but... well it's really hard to write out because I've never really written third person. First person I'm good at but with third it sounds so weird and i use too much he said she said. So long story short can anyone help me out"? And if anyone would like to be a co-author you can be, I'll give you credit and everything, I promise. I have these good and great ideas and I want to write them out but I need help, please someone reply. I know I might sound lame for not being able to write in both narratives but if anyone can help me out it'd be really great.
Rachel
Gender:
Points: 690
Reviews: 4