Hi all, I'm basically looking for tips on the plot of my story: topic73145.html Stuff that doesn't fit, or that I missed but you think should be there, any comment is welcome! =P
If I'm understanding correctly, you're asking for a review in Writing Tips. You can very easily ask for plot help in an author's note at the end of your piece. Or, if you want guaranteed reviews, ask people on their will review for food threads.
A post in Writing Tips should be a bit more general so others can benefit from it. If you come up with a general question, let me know.
Because this is just asking for reviews in a general manner, this is locked.
~Rosey
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