Okay, so I wrote this in a five min rant and I'm not sure about how it is, whether it is good or not, so any suggestions and comments would be great!
I’m not much into games
but for your sack I’ll play.
You ask why
and I explain.
Cause and effect
had a great deal to do
with why, as you say,
you lost everything.
See, the story being written
started out so great
I guess I was naive to think
that it would end as such
As introductions goes
this one was a simple classic.
Girl meets boy, likes what she see’s
and you guessed it, they fell in love!
Through out the rising action
you watch her grow, transform
from a shy little turtle
into somewhat of a playful kitten.
Now over the course of a year and a half
he became her first “everything”
first kiss, touch, and lover,
and she was happy to have given him her world.
At the year and a half mark we reach the climax
and this story takes a full turn for the worst.
As in most love stories there is deception
and while the kitten was away the mouse did play.
How foolish you were, you silly boy,
to think that you could get away,
and hide your dirty deed,
from the knowledge of your so call love.
And so when she found out
her heart just stopped its beating
her sorrow the only think keeping her alive
she bid farewell to her wayward lover
and slowly turned to stone.
So when you ask me why you, as you say,
lost the only thing going good in your life
I answer with a hard smile
“That’s what happens when
'Romeo' cheats on 'Juliet'.”
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